Peer Review

 Last week, me and my partner presented our magazines to our class. The feedback we got back was better than what I could've asked for. All of our peers loved our magazine and how professional it looked. We are really far ahead and need to make only tiny additions to my magazine. On one of my pages I talk about my parents and how they came up with the idea for these pancakes. The only addition I have to add according to the feedback I received is to add a picture of my parents onto my page with my feature article. Currently, there is just a picture of a pancake in the corner. I plan on adding a picture of my parents into the top corner so that the readers will be able to have a better understanding of who we are talking